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Everyone's a Critic

*sigh*
So Nini tells me that the last few paragraphs in my previous post do not "flow" - that it seems disjointed from the rest, with only a tenuous link in the theme. In fact, I had barely made it through the front door, and had just been shepherded to the stove by mpo to have a taste of his concoction in the saucepan, when she pounced with a "Hello, I liked your blogging, except the last bit doesn't make sense. It doesn't have anything to do with the rest of the piece."

Apologies, little sister. Next time I will either have a proper segue, or make it a separate post. Will that do?

whippersnapper

(thanks anan)

Comments (1)

Various (4):

Nini said...

And if it didn't... then what..?
Then I would really be in trouble

So lose some, lose some more....;-)

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